This term we have been learning to add description to our writing about character, action and setting. I have picked my best sentences to write about. I hope you enjoy reading them.
Can you find three similes?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
This term we have been learning to add description to our writing about character, action and setting. I have picked my best sentences to write about. I hope you enjoy reading them.
Can you find three similes?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Well done Jack, some great sentences here - I like your use of similes. I can find one simile at the top in the middle, and also you describing the wolf and the monster. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteMiss Gill.